- How well does the opening work to introduce a main character experiencing conflict and to initiate a series of actions?
I am going to add more detail on why my reading level was so low. I am also going to give more background on the story.
- What is the main conflict or tension in the narrative? Do all the scenes in the story contribute to developing or resolving that conflict or tension?
I plan to give a better view on the scenario so the reader can be more informed on the story. I will do this by having the scenes flow better with the story.
- What moment of insight or revelation does the character have in this story? Do the scenes that precede it prepare readers to understand that moment of insight?
I plan on making my Insight clearer. By doing this I am going to make my scenes for defined so the reader can understand better.
- What parts of the story could use more detail or development?
With more detail added/ developed it will give the reader more of a connection to the story. I am going to do in depth on scenes
- How well does the ending work to connect the story to the writer’s present self?
I plan on connecting my past self with who I am today. This will give more detail and give the reader a better view.
- If the writer has included a text-to-self connection to Sherman Alexei or Mike Rose, is the connection well-integrated into the story the writer is telling about his or her own literacy experiences?
I am going to connect Alexie with my story more clearer. By doing this the reader should be able to understand Alexies story better and make this connection to mine.
